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第22章 模板作文赏析(3)

5.So we should______

6.From my perspective,______

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The argument over______is heated.Some argue strongly that______

The opposing view is that______For example,______So we should______

From my perspective,______In fact,______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic The Celebration of Western Festivals.You should write at least 150words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日

2.产生这种现象的原因

3.这种现象可能带来的影响

范文欣赏

The Celebration of Western Festivals

Western festivals gain ever-increasing popularity in China.A growing number of people in China are immersed in the thrilling atmosphere of the upcoming Christmas.In comparison with the Spring Festival,the equally high status is givento Christmas by some of them.

There are a variety of factors contributing to this craze(trend).First,younger age groups are exposed to western culture and lifestyles through learning English.And festivals are regarded as the highlight of western culture.For example,Valentine’s Day provides a vehicle for young adults to show their love.Second,the advancement of economy enables Chinese people to possess increased purchasing power.They are heavily targeted by businessmen,who view foreign festivals as golden opportunities to make money.So they desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals.

The necessity of celebrating these foreign festivals is widely questioned.People involved are to blame for their loose traditional values.Our home-grown festivals play crucial roles in Chinese traditional culture.However,their foreign counterparts are exerting strong infuence on people‘s values and thoughts.There is no doubt that we should give our priority to Chinese traditional festivals.

妙语评析:从体裁上来看,属于解释一个现象的体裁。根据题目要求,考生分别需要写出现象描述、原因剖析以及影响分析等三个段落。文章的结构非常清晰,非常明确。从题材上来看,本次作文的话题是谈谈对西方节日的看法。可以先说明现象,再阐述原因,最后写影响。

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1.A growing number of people in China are immersed in______

2.In comparison with______

3.There are a variety of factors contributing to this craze(trend).

4.First,______For example,______Second,______

5.______is widely questioned.

6.There is no doubt that______

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A growing number of people in China are immersed in______In comparison with______There are a variety of factors contributing to this craze(trend).

First,______For example,______Second,______is widely questioned.There is no doubt that______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues.You should write at least 150words following the outline given below:

1.当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展;

2.发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德;

3.你的观点。

范文欣赏

Should We Still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues

Today’s youth do things in their own ways,spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is overstated by young people these days.To some of them,personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.

But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their forefathers were proud.Take the question of fidelity to elders for example.With better education and different experiences,some young people fnd it‘s hard to agree with their parents any longer.They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes turn their back on their elder parents.

To me,personality development and traditional virtues have nothing to do with right or wrong.In our society,we need them both.These virtues help you to become a better Chinese,while personality development will improve your own character.

妙语评析:这是一篇议论文,题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。根据提示,可分为三部分:年轻人的个性发展,可以适当举例;个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德,可以笼统地讲,也可以具体地解释某一种美德;最后提出自己的观点。第一段提出个性的发展,第二段解释个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德,第三段引出个人观点。

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1.To some of them,______

2.______is overstated by______

3.But the problem is that______

4.Take the question of______

5.To me,______

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Today’s______,To some of them,______

But the problem is that______,Take the question of______Some______They have______

To me,______In our society,______

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad.You should write at least 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学

2.出现这种现象的原因

3.这种现象可能带来的影响

范文欣赏

Studying Abroad

Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to fnish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more.Instead,some excellent boys and girls whose fnancial condition is fne simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.

There are several reasons to cause this change.First of all,with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries,most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many felds,especially in science and technology,between China and western countries.They thirst for studying aboardto get ready better for the ferce competition in the job-hunting market.Moreover,the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.

Besides,the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available,which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.

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