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第32章 模板作文赏析(13)

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The Tape Recorder

The tape recorder is one of the most welcome and popular electronic devices ever invented.For example,it can reproduce sounds quite well,which are hardly distinguishable from the original.Besides,it is very handy and can be carried around.Furthermore,tape recorders are not so expensive as color TV sets or video-tape players,so most families can afford them.Therefore,the tape recorder is liked by everyone and has entered most homes.

This device is useful in many ways.For example,it is used by people to play music and thus gives them a lot of pleasure.Another example is that it is an effective aid for learning a foreign language.It may also serve as a useful tool for many professionals such as reporters and policemen and enables them to work effciently.

However,it can also become a nuisance.Some youngsters play the tape recorder late at night and therefore disturb their neighbours‘rest.Some shop-owners use it to attract customers and they often play music so loudly that customers feel very annoyed with it.Thus,the tape recorder should be put to good use.

妙语评析:文章首先介绍了这款录音机的主要性能,说明它的功能多而且便于携带,适合每个人使用,第二段举例介绍它的多种用途,第三段又强调我们应该正确使用录音机,不要让它影响其他人的生活。

句型模板

1.The_____is one of the most welcome and popular_____ever invented.

2.Besides,_____Furthermore,_____Therefore,_____

3.For example,_____Another example is that_____

全文模板

Topic

The_____is one of the most welcome and popular_____ever invented.

Besides,_____Furthermore,_____Therefore,_____For example,_____Another example is that_____However,_____Thus,_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition

on the topic“Computer”.You composition should be based on your own

understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Computer

The computer is a wonderful machine.It is probably the most important invention in man’s history.Although the first modern computer was not built until 1946,the history of computers can be traced back to the 17th century.With each and every passing year scientists are coming up with computers that are faster,smaller,cheaper and more powerful.

Computers are now being used almost everywhere,whether in government agencies or in business offices,in schools or at homes.They have become pervasive in our lives.A wholly computerized society is beginning to become more of a reality than just mere science fction.

Computers play an increasingly important role in our lives.Thanks to computers,our lives are more comfortable,more convenient and more enjoyable.In fact,we are now so dependent on computers that we can not imagine how we could go on living without them.Realize it or not,in this Computer Age computers havealready revolutionized our lives.

妙语评析:这篇说明文主要介绍了电脑的用途和它的重要性。首先说明它是人类史上最重要的一项发明,然后在第二段开始列举它的种种用途,几乎各个领域范围都涉及电脑,所以它在人们的生活中扮演着极为重要的角色,电脑时代已经给我们的生活带来的巨大变革。

句型模板

1.It is probably the most important invention in man‘s history.

2.Although_____are now being used almost everywhere,whether in_____or in_____,in_____or_____.

3.Thanks to_____In fact,_____

全文模板

Topic

It is probably the most important invention in man’s history.

Although_____are now being used almost everywhere,whether in_____or in_____,in_____or_____.

Thanks to_____In fact,Realize it or not,_____

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic:Turn off Your Mobile Phone.You should write at least 150words according to the situation given below in Chinese:

1.移动电话给我们的生活带来了便利

2.移动电话有时也会影响别人

3.在某些场合请关掉你的手机

范文欣赏

Turn off Your Mobile Phone

With the development of information technology and reduced price of communication products,the mobile phone has become a necessity for mostpeople.Obviously,it shortens the distance between people and makes our life more convenient.Thanks to it,it‘s easy for us to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere.We will never miss any important meetings,great deals or admirable opportunities.

But,have you noticed sometimes the mobile phone also brings embarrassment to us?It’s not rare to see someone pressing the mobile phone to his ear and shouting loudly in public as if there were no one else present.And I‘m sure each one has had such an experience that the mobile phone ring continuously on a formal occasion.Perhaps these People have many life-and-death reasons to keep the phone working at all times,but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what they don’t care when they want to concentrate on what they‘re doing.

So if you are one of them,please turn off your cell phone in public,especially on a quiet and serious occasion.It’s a respect for both others and yourself.

妙语评析:文章的第一段说明了手机已经开始成为人们的一种必需品,它让我们的沟通更加方便,第二段从另一方面说明手机也会给人们带来不便,尤其是在公共场合使用手机会影响周围的人,所以在某些公共场合应该关掉你的手机。

句型模板

1.Obviously,_____Thanks to it_____

2.I‘m sure_____

3.So if you are_____please_____especially_____

全文模板

Topic

Obviously,_____Thanks to it_____But,have you noticed_____to us?I’m sure_____Perhaps_____

So if you are_____please_____especially_____It‘s a respect for both others and yourself.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic“Modernization of Family Life”.You composition should be based on yourown understanding of the topic and it should be no less than 150words.

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Modernization of Family Life

With the rapid development of the society,family life is becoming modernized.Years ago,people considered owing radios,sewing machines,watches and bicycles as being modernized.But in recent years,almost all families have TV sets,refrigerators and washing machines.It is very common to see people ride motorcycles or even drive private cars and more and more families have telephones,computers and air-conditioners.

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