The first paragraph describes the aunt’s or uncle’s visit and the scene at the railway station.
The second paragraph describes the scene at the exit and what the aunt/uncle did on seeing the boy/girl.
The last paragraph tells of the meeting with the aunt/uncle and their departure from the railway station.
6.Some helping words to help to write the composition.
参考词汇
holidaygreetplatformtrainmake one’s way arrival section
Writing Activity 写作活动
A Visit to the Railway Station
Para.1 (controlled)
Last Sunday afternoon, my aunt came .
My sister and I went .
When we arrived .The departure platform .Many people were off.
Para.2 (guided) Complete the second paragraph using the helping words below:
made our wayarrival platform tickets checked
smiled and waved passengers exitwaiting
Para.3 ( free)
Soon,
Model Passage 13
The Friendly Fishmonger (鱼贩)
Housewives know him as Liu San.He runs a fish——stall at Hongbao Trade Centre, where he started his business about 2 years ago.Housewives buy from him because the fish he sells is usually very fresh and cheap.
At first he worked for a small company and was laid off.Then he helped his father who owned a fish——stall inside Zhuyin Market.After he had learned enough of the fish business from his father, he decided to start his own.So when a new market opened in Hongbao Trade Centre, Liu San applied for a license and the government gave him a stall in the fish section.He did not have enough money to start his business, so his father lent him some.After a year, he was able to repay the loan.
But his life is not an easy one.Each morning he has to get up early to get his supply of fish.Then he sells his fish at his stall at 8:30 till late in the afternoon when there is nothing left, and he washes up his stall, keeps all the things and returns home.Although his business is good, he has to work hard.He works every day, Sundays included.
Presentation:
1.Read the above text carefully.仔细阅读范文
2.Pay attention to the tenses used in the passage.注意范文的时态
Para.1.present tense
……2.past tense
……3.present tense
3.The title of a possible parallel text: 仿写作文题目
The Friendly Bookshop Owner
4.Write strictly following the model text.
紧随范文的组织结构、段落和时态完成作文
Writing activity.写作活动
Para.1(controlled)
School children know him as .He runs North Street of Zhongning.He started his business about
.School children buy because his books are usually and .
Para 2(Guided)
At first
After
When
Para 3 (Free) Finish the story in your own words.
Model Passage 14
At the Dental Clinic
While Mrs.Song was teaching history, Wang Bin found that he had a loose tooth.He asked for permission to go to the dental clinic outside the school.
At the dental clinic, he told the nurse that he had a loose tooth.She told him to wait for his turn.There were other people waiting.They were reading some books and talking to one another.Wang Bin looked around the waiting room.He noticed some posters on the wall.They were colorful.He read them.He learned what food was bad for teeth.Another poster showed that it was necessary to brush our teeth daily.
After waiting for 10 minutes, the nurse called his name.He went into the dental surgery.He sat on the chair and the dentist turned on a bright lamp.He opened his month.The dentist pulled out his loose teeth, but Wang Bin did not feel any pain.
When he returned to the classroom, the history lesson was over.He said sorry to Mrs.Song for being late.
Presentation
1.Read the model passage carefully.仔细阅读理解范文
2.Pay attention to the four paragraphs: 注意四个不同地方
Where was Wang Bin?
1st paragraph: in the classroom
2nd paragraph: in the waiting room
3rd paragraph: in the dental surgery
4th paragraph: back in the classroom
3.Write a similar passage :根据范文的结构、时态写作
4.Write in five paragraphs.At the clinic 写五段
5.The following words and phrases in the table can be used.
用下表中的词汇写前四段
1st Para 2nd Para3rd Para4th Para
At home In the waiting room In the doctor’s roomAt the counter
school fever doctorclinic patients posters thermometer stethoscope flu prescriptionmedicine regularly
patients病人posters 宣传画
prescription 处方 flu 流感
stethoscope 听诊器 counter （药）柜台
Writing activity 写作活动
At the Clinic
Fill in the blanks in the first three paragraphs:
(1) Last Friday, Liu Ying did not go to because she had a .Her took her to see the .
(2)At the clinic, .They were .The nurse told
.She .
She read them and learned that
.
(3)After a while, .
They went .The doctor
.He told Liu Ying’s mother that
.
Complete the 4th paragraph using these words：
reception counter(药房) nurse medicine
regularlypaid taxi
(4)After leaving the room
Write the last paragraph in your own word：
(5)At home,
Model Passage 15
Fishing
One of the things that I like to do most with my father is fishing.We often go fishing together during the school holidays.
Yesterday we went fishing to the Changshan Lake, which is 30 kilometers south of Zhongning.After a quick breakfast, we started at 7:00 a.m in my father’s car.An hour later, on arriving at the lake, we chose a good place to put our things.Then we got out the fishing rods and baits.We fixed the baits to the tiny hooks on our lines and cast them out into the water.Soon the hungry fish fed on the bait and we frequently pulled out a fish at a time.They struggled a lot and this made it very exciting.Till 11:00, each of us caught up to 20 fish.How satisfied we felt!
Noon time came, we felt hungry.We collected our things and put them in the car, we got home at 2 o’clock in the afternoon.
Presentation
1.Read the passage carefully and remember it.
阅读、熟读范文
2.Think about the contents of the passage.
分析范文的主要内容
Hobby: fishing
When: yesterday
Where: the Changshan Lake, 30 km away
How to get there: in my father’s car
Departure time: 7:00 am
Arrival time: 8:00 am
Things to do: chose a place, got ready, fixed the baits, cast
Time to return: 2:00 pm
3.The title of the parallel text 仿写作文题目
Title(题目): Outing
4.What to write: 写作内容
Hobby Outing
When Last Sunday
Where Shapotou ,100km away
How to get there By bus
Departure time8:30am
Arrival time 9:30am
Things to do Slide down the sand slope, rode on the cable car across the Yellow River, float on the raft made of sheep’s skin, rode camels
Time to return 4:00pm
Writing activity 写作活动
Outing
(1)One of the things with my two friends is .We often
together during .
